Guys,
this is the last paragraph. Yeachh we analyzed persuasive paragraph and
illustration paragraph. I think those are the hardest paragraphs. I thought
long time to make it. I analyzed Yogi’s paragraphs. His paragraphs were good
but I little didn’t understand about his illustrative paragraph. I also don’t
understand how to differentiate between illustration paragraph and definition
paragraph. Sometimes I feel hard to differentiate it. It looks same but I know
it is different. I hope we can discuss it…
my smile
Sabtu, 17 November 2012
Rabu, 24 Oktober 2012
Short Reflective
This week, we
only have one meeting because another meeting is holiday. It is Idul Adha Day.
We analyzed argumentative paragraph. I analyzed Yuyun’s paragraph. It is a good
paragraph. She argued about student brawl. Talking my paragraph, I have to
study more and more. It is so many corrections in my paragraph. We still study
right,,. Keep spirit. We have tasks; make an illustration and Persuasive
paragraph. Next week, Writing is free…. So what will you do guys? Doing
assignment..? ;D
Just Workshop
This week, our activities were workshop only
because all of student had presented. On
Wednesday we analyzed process analyzes, and I analyzed iswatin’s paragraph. It
is a good paragraph. She explained about how to make strawberry juice.
Strawberry juice can make our body be healthy. Next meeting, we analyzed
definition paragraph and I got aris’ paragraph. He explained about carbohydrate
and protein. I think it should be 2 paragraphs because it defined protein and
carbohydrate. Actually, sometimes I am little bit confused about definition
because it looks like illustration. This week was so interesting. New knowledge
: D
Jumat, 12 Oktober 2012
More than 2 Meetings
3 time meetings in one week. Wow,,,!
Yeach the one meeting is make up class. First meeting was on Monday
morning. We analyzed cause and effect paragraph in Pascasarjana Building. I
analyzed Nita’s paragraph. It’s a good and clearly paragraph. I like that
paragraph. After analyzing it, question in my mind is if we write effect and we
mention causes, is it call effect cause paragraph? Or still cause effect. Ha ha
ha. On Wednesday is a second meeting. Some of our friends presented their
paragraph. They were the last presenters. Even though there is a little debate,
but we were happy. Moreover, on Friday’s meeting. We analyzed classification
paragraph while eating. Okta gave snacks. Yummy.. Thanks Okta. I analyzed Ima’s
paragraph. She told about types of
clothes. It’s a good paragraph. Actually we had four meetings but one was canceled,
so we had 3 meetings. It is a busy week but we are happy right.. ;D
Senin, 01 Oktober 2012
The next reflection
On Wednesday we analyzed about comparison and contrast paragraph. I
thought it was little bit hard because we have to compare something with
another. While we were analyzing, we
also were eating and listening to music in order to we were relax. On Friday we
presented. Some of students presented about paragraph except narrative,
descriptive, and comparison and contrast paragraph. The first lesson‘s that we
have to know, “don’t judge the paragraph by its cover”. We have to read all, so
we can know what paragraph is. We learn about difference between topic and
topic sentence. We have much knowledge from this week. Hopefully we can make it
useful. ;)
Minggu, 23 September 2012
My presentation
The third reflection. On Wednesday,
we discussed descriptive text.I analyzed descriptive made by Aida’Kajol’. Em..She
described Hintrik R, one of actors from india. Her desription is so good. I
like it. On Friday, it’s time to present. Some of ours present about any
paragraph. On the middle discussion, I little confuse between explanation and
definition. They look like same. I also
presented about process analysis. At the first I read, I thought it was
classification but I reread again and I am sure it is process analysis. We have
homework to make comparrison and contrast paragraph. Spirit guys in process
learning. ;)
Sabtu, 15 September 2012
curious
This is my second reflective blog. This week is
so curious. I get new knowledge there. On Wednesday, I had made narrative text
and Aini checked my narrative and gave comments. So did i. I also checked and
gave comments Aini’s narrative. So I can learn about her text. On Friday, some
of my friends presented about paragraph. There were some parts that make me curious.
What is different between explanation and illustration? In my mind, illustration explain about the
event with explain and explanation only explain something. But is it true? On
that day, there is misunderstanding between yogi and the student. I think from
that moment we can’t cut or modify the paragraph because it will make confuse. So
guys please help me to overcome and we can discuss it. ;)
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